Tuesday, December 4, 2012

Imitation # 6 (2000's) Eminem - Till I Collapse


Joel Milian                                                                                                                              12/1/12
Till I Collapse
By- Eminem (2002)
Music is like magic there’s a certain feeling you get when you're real
And you spit and people are feeling your shit.
This is your moment and every single minute you spend trying to hold onto it
'cause you may never get it again.

So while you’re in it try to get as much shit as you can
And when your run is over just admit when it's at its end.
'Cause I'm at the end of my wits with half this shit that gets in.
I got a list here's the order of my list that it's in.

Critique:
One of my personal favorite Eminem songs, “Till I Collapse” is a very inspirational and thought provoking song about not giving up. Eminem also makes references to his career, his status in the rap game and how he will continue to rap and not let anyone put him down. In these 8 bars from the song, Eminem refers to how rap gives him a sensation because it’s true and his audience loves and respects his music. He also knows that though it may be temporary, he has to enjoy and make the most out of his current position. The verse in this song definitely has some aspects of a confessional when Eminem list his favorite rappers and how he will not be fazed by the media. The rest of the song is a critique on not letting people put you down and trying your best, even when you feel like quitting. What’s great about this song is that is can apply to anyone in any situation where they need to be inspired. Eminem is speaking to his fans, himself and anyone whose potential is questioned and second guessed. The most common literary device in these lines from the song is simile; when Eminem says “Music is like magic.” The tone in these bars is definitely inspirational and compelling, using words like “real, feeling, moment and wits.” There is also End Rhyme in the second and third line ending with “shit” and “it.” 

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